Story Wrangling

or Developmental edit

Also known as a content or substantive edit. This big picture edit looks at the plot, structure, pacing, worldbuilding, and character development. You receive in line queries and a detailed editorial letter with actionable suggestions to strengthen your manuscript while honoring your unique story and voice.

Line drawing with a vintage feel of a woman holding a lasso in her right hand and a looped rope in her left hand.

The details

After filling out the intake form, we’ll talk about your goals for the project and what you’re looking for in an editor. I’ll provide a sample edit for up to 2000 words. If we are a good fit, you’ll send me your manuscript and I’ll get to work.


Who it’s for

Developmental editing is the first stage of editing. This edit is about the big picture. Is the story in your head translating onto the page? Are there plot holes? Does the structure make sense? Do your character arcs make sense?

If something feels off in your story but you’re not sure what, you likely need developmental editing.


what you’ll get

  • Detailed editorial letter that will identify big picture areas for improvement.

  • Manuscript with in-line queries

  • Evaluation of plot, structure, themes, character development, pacing, world building, dialogue, point of view, genre expectations, reader experience

  • What you won’t get: spell-check, grammar check, word choice

investment

$.016 per word